Shiromi Headshot Re-Do

I suddenly had the urge to re-do this:

I look at that now and I think it just looks terrible...But at the same time, I can see what I have done! >w<
*How in the world did I fail this much! XD*

For some reason, with this redone one. I'm not too fancy with the shading style...I think I might switch back to the usual ones I do
I think I'm starting to get the eye style that I like! >w<